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I was wrong
Its not okay
I'm not okay
I can't keep up this chirade
Everything is so wrong
I'm giving everyone these fake smiles
and I'm cracking
I want to see you again
to see you laugh and smile
to watch you stir sugar into your coffees
to watch you watch me with your blue eyes
I really do miss you
I miss it all
I told myself to say something, I did
but I couldn't, I froze, I was so stupid
And I'm so sorry for hurting you
I never realised how much it'd hurt
I just want it to stop
Its killing me
and all I have is myself to blame
The more i think about it
the more i hate myself for it

I could never forgive myself...
©2008-2009 ~CrimsonCravenheart
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This piece brought me to tears.
Its just, a power punch.

Beautiful.

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You wait little girl on an empty stage for fate to turn the light on...
This could make one great song. :) Really poignant, and to-the-point. Great work!

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~Ledroit~
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"~The tattooed skeletons are those authors who wish to replace what flesh they lack with artificial colours~"
thanks....really? you think it could be a song? never thought of it that way, hmmm

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I’m running out of morphine lies to tell you
And the truth will hurt more
The lies are a band aid with side effects
And I’m on overdose

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ha! it brought me to tears when i was writing it too...thank you for the comment

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I’m running out of morphine lies to tell you
And the truth will hurt more
The lies are a band aid with side effects
And I’m on overdose

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Yeah, why not? I suppose a good number of written works could be made into songs, even the most unlikely ones, when interpreted by talented folk. :) You could always try~ "Lyric-writer looking for a band" kind of thing ^^

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~Ledroit~
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"~The tattooed skeletons are those authors who wish to replace what flesh they lack with artificial colours~"
lol thanks, i might just do that :)

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I’m running out of morphine lies to tell you
And the truth will hurt more
The lies are a band aid with side effects
And I’m on overdose

:gallery: [link]
[link] click
Wow! That's some powerful writting. So sad *hugs*

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No one deserves to be alone
thank you

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I’m running out of morphine lies to tell you
And the truth will hurt more
The lies are a band aid with side effects
And I’m on overdose

:gallery: [link]
[link] click
very beautiful and meaningful as well. i very much like this ^-^

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The Things that will influence or change your life the most, are The PEOPLE you know, and the BOOKS you read. ~ Mrs. Cruz

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